Really excellent paper. I have to agree this is the best paper to keep me interested and informed at the same time. I did not feel like I was forcing myself to connect points or just flat out keep reading. The transition from informal to formal was very well done, I would include some evidence from your most formal article to represent the tone of the article. As you did with your first article of the blog. This is true for the second article as well. It just seemed a little off, when you have many quotes for your first article to little to none in the latter two articles. For example in your conclusion you state about the calm, collected tone but you actually list no examples of the evidence. I know this is nitpicky, but there is very little to improve on your paper. The paper has a very good analysis of all the articles in finding the intended purpose toward its respective audience. You have a real good understanding on what the author was going for in each article, for example the second article providing a balance between students and adults alike. As the introduction and conclusion are very well done in providing background info and then wrapping the paper off by relating back to your thesis. There isn’t really anything wrong with your paper, and very few minor tweaks. Sorry to not really be helping in improving your paper, but it is really well done.
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